Please rate/fix my stall/ exodia deck?( For competition)?

add some foolish burial i know it sounds crazy but u can use it to ditch your pieces to the graveyard then add backup soldier so you can retrive any 3 normal monster with 1500 or less back to your hand.also 3 hand destructions should help you cut down to get those pieces add card trader if you want to. jar of greed helps a little bit solemn judgement also handy but i like your deck you have a good idea how you are going to use it u have many stall cards but u also needs drawing power for an exodia deck also ordeal of the traveler isnt such a great card a person might get 1 card wrong the 1st time but he knows if its a monster ect the next time so anyway id rate it 8/10